Hear from writers I’ve worked with

  • "I had such a wonderful experience working with Lily. Her knowledge of the craft shines in her detailed comments and in her understanding of my work through both a writer's and reader's lens. Her feedback makes me excited to improve my story instead of weighing me down with negativity. The critiques she gives are both genuine and thoughtful, designed to improve my work based on my vision instead of to simply give opinions or make my story something it isn't. In particular, I appreciate the time she takes to explain why she makes such suggestions. She both understands and explains in her feedback letter the things that readers expect to see (e.g. pacing, character arcs, making plot connections). But she takes it a step further by giving me clear suggestions about how I can incorporate those things into my work by enhancing/tightening what I already have. Her suggestions are practical, thought-provoking, and show the same level of care as if the story were her own. Though I had a couple unofficial beta readers (people I knew) read over my story, the level of detail and thoughtfulness that goes into Lily's feedback makes her beta reading well worth the price. Her experience with editing and writing in professional contexts takes her feedback to a level above what I could find from most casual readers. I would highly recommend her to anyone seeking a qualified beta reader, especially if you're unsure whether or not to have a beta reader to begin with. Having others read/critique my work was a scary step, but Lily made the whole process less intimidating. Her guidance leaves me more confident in my ability to take my story to the professional level I'm seeking."

    - V. Lee Gilbert, Aspiring Author

  • “Lily’s approach to feedback is uniquely influenced by her understanding of storytelling and characters. While working with Lily, she took delicate care of my work while providing incredibly constructive and honest feedback - she went above and beyond as a beta reader! She provided detailed feedback through various areas of my work, not just focusing on her raw reaction as a reader, but providing insight through her writer’s eye. From character to plot and prose, Lily laid out extensive thoughts and critiques throughout my entire manuscript. Even in the feedback that was hard to hear (suggestions to change things I loved), she was delicate in the way she explained her intentions. Her tender care for my story allowed me to take in that feedback and see her reasoning more clearly. My story changed for the better with Lily as a beta reader and guide through my editing process. Lily has a way of working with authors that I have never found with another editor or beta reader; she disarms all your reservations while opening up your mind to other opportunities. My story felt safe in her hands, because it was clear she loved it and wanted the best for it as if it were her own. I would vouch for her skills, services and personality a million times over. I anticipate we will be seeing great things from her in the future, and I look forward to working with her again soon."

    - Sofia, Published Author

  • "Working with Lily has been one of the highlights of my writing process as she helped to delve into the terrifying abyss of developmental edits for my dark academia fantasy novel, and from the very beginning, her approach was thoughtful, kind, and incredibly insightful. What really stood out to me was how she didn’t try to fix the book for me — instead, she asked the kind of questions that made me think differently about my characters, plot, and themes. Half the time I found myself wondering, “How did she even think to ask that?” in the best possible way. Her in-line comments were a great balance of critique and encouragement — not just pointing out what wasn’t working, but also celebrating the parts that were. On top of that, she wrote a short editorial letter after each chapter, summarising what she thought was happening. It might sound simple, but that helped me realise what was actually making it onto the page… and what wasn’t. That kind of perspective is hard to get on your own. It meant a lot to be her client, and I feel lucky to have had her on my side during this extremely difficult part of the journey."

    - Cynthia, Aspiring Author

  • "I loved Lily's approach to editing my manuscript, she took time to meet with me before and after the edits were completed, to get a feel for what I was looking for. I think she did an excellent job and she is definitely worth hiring! If you're looking for someone who will care for your manuscript as much as you do, you've found your editor! The thing I found most refreshing about Lily's style of editing is that she works with what you have—instead of pulling it apart— and helps you find the best version of your own story. Essentially walking with you through the dungeons of your imagination, guiding you as you find the missing pieces that were there all along! She's wonderful to partner with to help you really heighten your work and bring it to the next level!"

    - Monika, Published Author

  • “I really enjoyed my service. Your feedback was detailed, organized, well thought out and informative. I found value in you as a person, in the way you connect with your customers. 5/5"

    - Addy, Aspiring Author