Developmental Editing Evaluates:
Plot progression & consistency
Genre expectations
Character arc development (Motivations, relationships, internal conflict, etc.)
Pacing from entire manuscript to scene level
How Tension & Conflict drive the story forward
World-building integration (if applicable)
Immersive experience for readers (sensory details, narrative distance, evoking strong emotion)
Analyze how to connect story elements to create a cohesive and compelling manuscript that fits your vision!
“Lily has a way of working with authors that I have never found with another editor or beta reader; she disarms all your reservations while opening up your mind to other opportunities.”
-Sofia, Author
“Her feedback was knowledgeable and framed in a positive manner, and every revision she suggested was clear and actionable, working within my book’s existing framework.”
-Jenna, Author
Services Include:
Pre-Edit Consultation discussing expectations, desired feedback, getting to know each other, and your story
Two read-throughs of the manuscript
In-manuscript developmental feedback on specific story elements through sidebar comments
Final Editorial letter (15-20 Pages), detailing the manuscript’s strengths and highlighting areas to consider revisions
Post-Edit Consultation to recap all edits and brainstorm future action!
How Much Does it Cost?
My rate is $0.02 per word. I offer flexible payment plans to meet your needs.
I specialize in Fantasy and Romance genre fiction and everything in between; however, I work across different genres. Please feel free to ask any questions you may have.
The Details (FAQs)
Artificial Intelligence (AI) Policy
To protect the integrity of the craft of writing, I do not accept manuscripts that were created with generative AI, and do not use generative AI in any part of the editing process. If you have any questions or concerns, please don’t hesitate to reach out. Thank you!
Booking a Service
For every service, a 10% deposit of the full quote and a contract agreement are needed to secure a spot in my calendar.
Payments
I offer customized payment plans to meet your needs, as long as the full fee is paid before the Post-Edit Meeting.
Sample Edits
As a Developmental Editor, sample edits often don’t give a full picture of what an edit will entail. However, I do offer sample edits after meeting for a free consultation. This way, I can have a better idea of the writer’s vision in accordance with the desired service before.